Ginger
Kit
"When do we truly lose our minds? When we watch our family die? When we kill friends?"
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Post by Ginger on Dec 21, 2010 19:29:00 GMT -5
Name: Twilightsoul Gender: Tom Age: 16 Moons Clan: Shadowclan Rank: Deputy
Picture:
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Short Description: A black tom with bright oceanic eyes.
Personality:
He is very insecure about everything he does. He seems to have absolutely no confidence and is always seeming to screw up in his imagination. He Is a very good fighter that will always be loyal to his friends/clan-mates alone and will always be ready to defend his friends. He believes that he does not fit the role of being deputy and wishes he was never chosen. He used to always kept to himself and try to stay in the shadows before being picked. He has no ambition to rule. When training an apprentice he makes them practice long and hard. Most of his apprentices end up good strong warriors with incredible sneaking abilities.
History:
Kittenhood: He was born with two different siblings. He always got along with them. They were the perfect trio. They all grew to a happy normal life.
Apprenticehood: Twilightpaw's mentor was rough on him. He had forced him to do harsh training and Twilightpaw highly respects him. The mentor taught Twilightpaw how to be the best stalker and prey catcher. He had died right before Twilightpaws's ceremony.. The death is unknown to this day. However right before his ceremony Twilightpaw had a scar on his shoulder.. He told them it was from a long sharp stick that had cut him. He bares this scar today.
Warriorhood and Deputy hood: His memory haunted him day and night. It still haunts him. He tore from his family and kin. He is always alone always working by himself. Many call him the mysterious cat. No cat could figure what had cut him form the clan.
He finally forced himself to get over his past and focused on the future. He trained one apprentice and had trained her to her best ability. He had a tendency to be rougher on her then the other apprentices. He is very gentle around kittens fearing he would break them apart. He became a deputy after his apprentice became a warrior. He accepted the role and played it as well as his abilities allow him.
Unfortunately if anyone ever found out about his secret he would betray his clan and leave more hurt then what he began with. He still feels deep down he is a traitor to his clan mates. This little secret prevents him form falling in love. It also allows him to believe he is becoming what he fears most.
Other: He had killed his mentor. His mentor was the real traitor of the clan. However, Twilightsoul still feels deeply loyal to his mentor.
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Post by Jetclaw on Dec 21, 2010 20:07:24 GMT -5
Looks good. and sure he can be deputy! =D
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